All human beings should be treated equally whether they are male, female, trans, gay, bisexual, Heterosexual, lesbian, Asexual, Demisexual, Pansexual. In the book Children blood and Bone by Tomi Adeyemi. A memorable idea from this book is that everyone is an individual.
In chapter 9 How Amari screams and Zelie's drags her towards the flames but Zelie can’t hear her because of the blood pounding in her ears and when she sees father’s face. This event shows us that everything twists inside Zelie when she saw fathers face, Zelie is scared when she saw fathers face. And another scene in this book is in chapter 36 when Amari tries to convince Inan to make his own choices because he was making fathers choices, copying him. In this event, we understand that Inan is copying fathers choices and not making his own choices...
Thanks for posting your work, Ansh!
ReplyDeleteYou have a strong introduction and have written about two scenes. You just needed to keep going to develop your argument further.
Don't be disheartened - this is difficult stuff. You get better by asking questions and giving it your best shot every time.