Why plastic bags should be removed from supermarkets?
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Have you ever thought of your family members dying because of harmless plastic bags?
The cause of this problem is because of us careless human beings are throwing these plastic bags into thin air. And who knows what it could run in to, but all that I know is the plastic bag is affecting our marine life badly and we need to do something about this big problem. Rather than using plastic bags, we could use paper bags like already do in some supermarkets like New World or we can use edible plastic bags. I think they sell edible plastic bags overseas somewhere on one of the 3 or 4 islands.
But I strongly agree that plastic should be removed from supermarkets.
I liked that you used strong adjectives like "careless" to make your writing more effective.
ReplyDeleteYour next step would be including some facts and examples, as mentioned above :)