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Wednesday 7 August 2019

English Debates topic

    Why plastic bags should be removed from supermarkets?
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Have you ever thought of your family members dying because of harmless plastic bags? 
  Well, this horrible thing is exactly happing right now in the marine life, As you read there are fish/turtles and many more sea and animals creatures sadly dying because of these plastic bags.  
The cause of this problem is because of us careless human beings are throwing these plastic bags into thin air. And who knows what it could run in to, but all that I know is the plastic bag is affecting our marine life badly and we need to do something about this big problem. Rather than using plastic bags, we could use paper bags like already do in some supermarkets like New World or we can use edible plastic bags. I think they sell edible plastic bags overseas somewhere on one of the 3 or 4 islands.
But I strongly agree that plastic should be removed from supermarkets.

2 comments:

  1. Hi Ansh!
    I like how you added a relevant photo to your blog and used a question that makes the reader think.
    Speaking of, no, I don't think I've ever thought of my family members dying because of plastic bags.
    Next time, maybe you could add some more reasons why you agree that plastic should be removed from supermarkets, as well as some facts and examples to back them up!

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  2. I liked that you used strong adjectives like "careless" to make your writing more effective.
    Your next step would be including some facts and examples, as mentioned above :)

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